Flash Fiction
Jonny was a nine-year-old boy who live in a small town named tomato town. Jonny would ride his bike around town and one day he came across this cave. He decided he was going to go in to this cave and explore. When Jonny gets in the cave he notices this door. He goes up to the door and opens it and there are gold coins everywhere. Jonny quickly put as many coins in his bag. Just before he was about to leave the door opens and a big man comes in. He grabs Jonny and takes his bag and throws him out of the cave. Jonny was very scared. He rode his bike to the police station and told them what happened. The polices went and arrested the man for stealing coins from the government and little Jonny was the hero of the town. 

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  1. Caleb CurryNovember 7, 2017 at 9:21 AM

    What does this mean? I can wrap my head around the story, but is this supposed to reflect a dilemma that goes on in your head? Is Jonny supposed to represent you and how you did something amazing when you were young, or does it mean something else?

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  2. FlyingSauserNovember 7, 2017 at 10:27 AM

    This is the single greatest piece of literature I've ever read. You deserve an award.

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  3. AnonymousNovember 7, 2017 at 11:37 AM

    I am confused as to what the message is of this story. What moral is trying to be pushed forward? With a general purpose and some polish this could be a decent little monster story.

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  4. UnknownNovember 7, 2017 at 11:40 AM

    I can tell you used a lot of imagination writing this piece.

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  5. UnknownNovember 9, 2017 at 9:14 AM

    This is very vague and needs some background information. It's very choppy and confusing to the reader. Where's the cave? How far into the cave is the door? Where did the man come from? Why does the government have gold coins?

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  6. UnknownNovember 9, 2017 at 12:01 PM

    So does this explore how in this world people can become heroes from the smallest things and how our society is broken and can arrest someone without investigation? and that we live in a broken society

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